'the gravity of challenges' - Bentley University Supplement Essay

If you could change one thing about your high school career, what would it be?

If I could change something about my high school career, it would be the GCE A'level subjects I studied: Mathematics,Economics & Business Studies. I'm very passionate about each of these subjects because of their appeal and application in my everyday routines. I employ them so often that they have become part and parcel of me, meanwhile, I like challenges. Repetition wears off the gravity of challenges. I would therefore want to study more challenging subjects such as Physics, Chemistry and Further Mathematics. These subjects would demand more from me and therefore push me to my capacity and stimulate my inner genius to surface. Also, it was my childhood dream to become a scientist like my name sake 'Albert' Einstein. These GCE A'level subjects would have made my childhood dream a reality.

Please help edit this essay. Thank you.

hate it. id rewrite it completely. really awkward in at most parts, do you have a functioning

:O A functioning? I'm new on here. And my essay writing skills are really not the best.

Albert, it's not a problem even if you do not have a good writing skills. This could be developed over time so read, read and read, and write a lot.

Some info on writing templates :-

Intro.
Point1 with supporting examples
Point1 with supporting examples.
Conclusion.

This is the easiest way to have a good essay. Use transition words. Do some research on the topic and then start writing.

Ok. I'll do that but it's just 800 characters. I can't really say much with 800 characters.