Hello everyone!:) I am applying to University of Illinois-Chicago and below is my personal essay. All corrections and comments are welcome! Your help will be appreciated! Thank you very much!
This is the topic that is given: Please provide an essay that explains why you chose your intended program of study. What interests you the most about this major? To which careers or job opportunities do you think acceptance into this program would lead?
Below is my essay:
Ever since I started to think about my future, health and science has been my top consideration. This is because I would like to serve in the health industry in the future and help others. After deep consideration, I discovered that Food and Nutrition would be a field that I am interested to further study in. There are two main reasons that helped me decide, the society and myself. [..]
This is the topic that is given: Please provide an essay that explains why you chose your intended program of study. What interests you the most about this major? To which careers or job opportunities do you think acceptance into this program would lead?
Below is my essay:
Ever since I started to think about my future, health and science has been my top consideration. This is because I would like to serve in the health industry in the future and help others. After deep consideration, I discovered that Food and Nutrition would be a field that I am interested to further study in. There are two main reasons that helped me decide, the society and myself. [..]