Hello! I am applying for a medical research internship for the summer. I would like for you to give me feedback please :)
Prompt: Why are you applying to this program? (300 WORD LIMIT)
Langston Hughes once said "Hold Fast to dreams for if dreams die, life is a broken-winged bird that cannot fly." I have held my dream of one day becoming a doctor ever since I was eight years old. My interest in the medical field not only pertains to the practical aspect, but to the research aspect as well. I want to be able to experience what it feels like to be the one saving lives, but also to be the one finding a cure. Although, I will not have the opportunity to fulfill the first desire until I get into medical school, applying for this internship will give the chance to carry out my latter wish. Moreover, this internship will enable me to obtain research experience and social experience.
To participate in this program, would be an amazing opportunity for my future ambitions. This chance can help me better understand the medical field I want to study and provide me with insights that will prepare me for my college years and medical school. Also, I would gain more insight in the research world and how it works. Even more, meeting people with similar interests like me is worthwhile.
In total, I really hope that I will be chosen to partake in this once in a lifetime opportunity, because it would open up so many doors for me. My skills in learning, listening, and speaking would be enhanced. This experience can practically change my life, and for the better. Even more, being in the presence of faculty researchers on a one-to-one scale will prepare me for future internships. It can set me off on my road to my success in doing what I desire: Helping the world to be a better place.
Prompt: Why are you applying to this program? (300 WORD LIMIT)
Langston Hughes once said "Hold Fast to dreams for if dreams die, life is a broken-winged bird that cannot fly." I have held my dream of one day becoming a doctor ever since I was eight years old. My interest in the medical field not only pertains to the practical aspect, but to the research aspect as well. I want to be able to experience what it feels like to be the one saving lives, but also to be the one finding a cure. Although, I will not have the opportunity to fulfill the first desire until I get into medical school, applying for this internship will give the chance to carry out my latter wish. Moreover, this internship will enable me to obtain research experience and social experience.
To participate in this program, would be an amazing opportunity for my future ambitions. This chance can help me better understand the medical field I want to study and provide me with insights that will prepare me for my college years and medical school. Also, I would gain more insight in the research world and how it works. Even more, meeting people with similar interests like me is worthwhile.
In total, I really hope that I will be chosen to partake in this once in a lifetime opportunity, because it would open up so many doors for me. My skills in learning, listening, and speaking would be enhanced. This experience can practically change my life, and for the better. Even more, being in the presence of faculty researchers on a one-to-one scale will prepare me for future internships. It can set me off on my road to my success in doing what I desire: Helping the world to be a better place.