Please relate your interest in studying at Georgetown University to your goals. How do these thoughts relate to your chosen course of study?
This is my favorite question, because it challenges kids to make a plan.
One word: alongside
It was peculiar to think that not so long ago, sectional differences made the very spot I sat on a boiling pot of war.--- This first paragraph does not seem to read like a history lesson. It draws me right into the scene.
It was a symbol of reunification, one
in which that I truly appreciate.
It is a history ----I think you should not repeat this phrase, but instead vary your sentences.
You write very well! Let's just make an adjustment with the BODY paragraphs and the INTRO&CONCLUSION. I think you should lengthen the conclusion, and also add a sentence to the end of the intro so, and in both of these places make it so that you plant an idea in the reader's mind that will be the main message of the essay.
You can take unnecessary details out of the body paragraphs to make room for these important "message" sentences in the intro and conclusion.
:-)
With a history of predominant division followed by struggling unity, I feel as though Georgetown would be the ideal foundation in which to build my interests.