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Topic:
In an essay of 300 words or less, please discuss your academic interests and/or professional goals.
"From now on you will manage your own money. This covers everything from toys to phone bills". My father handed me my first monthly allowance. Banks notes were tied together with a rubber band so thick that it looked like a brick. I was around ten years old and never in my life had I seen that much money before. "This is six thousand baht (about two-hundred dollars), to be used for the entire month." my father suggested. This perked my interest in finance. I was taught since I was young how to manage and budget money, as well as plan for each expense.
My interest in finance emerged when I was told numerous times that I was cautious at spending money. My mom told me; "Finance may be a major you would like to study". I began to research about what "finance" is, and how it functions in the business world. Having realized that finance is about managing money, I agreed that finance is the right major for me. Handling money since I was young is like a stepping stone towards my interest. My experiences of managing my allowances had confirmed my interest in finance and my goal to become a financer. "Financing is vital for any business to achieve success" said my father. It was this statement that propelled me to pursue my degree in finance.
To me, learning more about financing seems challenging and exciting. In today's world of competitive markets, finding ways to create profit seems like a thrilling challenge to conquer. I am confident that if I am given the opportunity to study more in the field of financing, I will continue to gain knowledge, learn strategic ways to manage, invest and make money grow, so that I may succeed in life as a financer.
Topic:
In an essay of 300 words or less, please discuss your academic interests and/or professional goals.
"From now on you will manage your own money. This covers everything from toys to phone bills". My father handed me my first monthly allowance. Banks notes were tied together with a rubber band so thick that it looked like a brick. I was around ten years old and never in my life had I seen that much money before. "This is six thousand baht (about two-hundred dollars), to be used for the entire month." my father suggested. This perked my interest in finance. I was taught since I was young how to manage and budget money, as well as plan for each expense.
My interest in finance emerged when I was told numerous times that I was cautious at spending money. My mom told me; "Finance may be a major you would like to study". I began to research about what "finance" is, and how it functions in the business world. Having realized that finance is about managing money, I agreed that finance is the right major for me. Handling money since I was young is like a stepping stone towards my interest. My experiences of managing my allowances had confirmed my interest in finance and my goal to become a financer. "Financing is vital for any business to achieve success" said my father. It was this statement that propelled me to pursue my degree in finance.
To me, learning more about financing seems challenging and exciting. In today's world of competitive markets, finding ways to create profit seems like a thrilling challenge to conquer. I am confident that if I am given the opportunity to study more in the field of financing, I will continue to gain knowledge, learn strategic ways to manage, invest and make money grow, so that I may succeed in life as a financer.