My introduction is about having a good career and a happy fulfilling personal life.

Would you like to have a good work or a happy personal life or both of them? The question of whether having a career should be plausbile has been debated in the last decade. To answer this question, we begin by taking a closer look at work and social life. Also people has a lot of crucial role. Considering the fact that, the controversy idea fails to maintain convincing relevant facts. In my opinion having both a career and a happy fulfilling personal life is definetely implausible. There are three important reasons such as time, family and stress..

Its only introduction.Please, Could you give me a feed back in order to write a rest of my essay?

please help mee

Very good start, unlike me. Now u need 3 boby paragraphs so "There are three important reasons such as time, family and stress.. " each one for a reason.

Ofc you conclusion well be kinda like your introduction but more of saying the 3 main reasons. Hope that helps.

thank your for your interest.I need to support someone.Also I have to write 5 paragraph essay.