Unanswered [0] | Urgent [0]
  

Home / Writing Feedback   % width Posts: 3

The best way to balance in successful career and happy family life at the same time


pujakurniawan19 9 / 16 4  
Aug 16, 2016   #1
Many people strive to maintain a successful career and happy family life at the same time. What problems can this situation cause? What are the possible solutions?

Having a happy family and success in career are the dream all of the people. Usually they try with highly ambitious to keeping a balance between it. The primary problem of this phenomenon is the people stressful cause have not enough time to rest. It is suggested that the most viable solutions is taking a job that close with family and easy in time management.

The most obvious problem associated with stressful cause impose focusing both on their career growth and family. If this continues, it will lead to more complex problems like fatigue and even they failed in their career or family happiness. For example, there is so many people who live in metropolis racing in career achievement and after that they so busy in manage their family when stay at home. As a result, they are getting illness and stress and give rise to bad impact to themselves.

A long term solution to this predicament is making a good time management so that get a stability. That is to say that work close to family such as entrepreneur or working online at home may be can have a bit pressure so that more enjoy. A 2013 recent National University of Singapore study reveals that more than 80% people who work close with their family tend to keep balance between career and job.

In conclusion, the people who too ambitious in career and in same time have to control their family cause they tend to stress easily. Where possible, choose the job that close with family so that simple in time management.

shadow7 4 / 17 4  
Aug 16, 2016   #2
Having a happy family and success in career are the dream all of the people. Usually they try with highly ambitious to keeping a balance between it . The primary problem of this phenomenon is the people stressful cause have not enough time to rest. It is suggested that the most viable solutions is taking a job that close with family and easy in time management. A happy family and a successful career are the dreams of all the people, usually people try ambitiously to keep the balance between the two of them. The main problem of this phenomenon is that people are stressed all the time because they don't have time to rest. It is alleged that the most valuable solution is having a job near the family that can be easily time managed.
hirani03 36 / 50 5  
Aug 18, 2016   #3
Hello.
I only find the corrections for this paragraph.
Keep writing.

... associated with stressful causecausesimpose focusingimposing focus both on their career ...
... it will lead tothe more complex problems like ...
For example, there isare so many people (...) after that they are so busy in manage their ...
... getting illness and stress and . It is also give rise to bad impact to themselvestheir selves .


Home / Writing Feedback / The best way to balance in successful career and happy family life at the same time