Lego Cars; MIT App/ Pleasure activity

We know you lead a busy life, full of activities, many of which are required of you. Tell us about something you do for the pleasure of it. (*)(100 words or fewer)

Stack a piece on top of another and you get one structure, switch it around and you can get a completely different structure; the endless possibilities that stem from simple pieces is where my passion for building began. Every contraption I think up, I am able to build and tinker with; starting from the basic Lego car to now working with VEX robotics, I have built a multitude of designs. For me building is a way to express my thoughts, a way to bring my ideas to life; it is what I love doing!

criticize please :D

luky0ne

Stack a lego piece on top of another and you getit becomes one structure; switch it around and you can getit becomes a completely different structure;T he endless possibilities that stem from simple pieces(the word 'individual components,' maybe?) is where my passion for building beganwhat began my passion for building (omit where. endless possibilities is not a place) . Every contraption I think up, I am able to build and tinker withI am able to build and tinker with every contraption I think up ; starting fF rom the basic Lego cars I built in my childhood(?), to working with VEX robotics in the present-day(?) , I have built a multitude of designs. For me building is a way to express my thoughts - a way to bring my ideas to life; it is what I love doing!

The fact I made a correction usually indicates an awkwardness, lack of flow, or grammatical mistake. The corrections I made are mostly suggestions, so feel free to alter your essay to suit your own voice! Feel free to repost your next draft, I'd be glad to critique it!

Perhaps if you could connect how building is your way of expressing thoughts, it woudl be better.