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LIM COLLEGE (laboratory institute of merchandising)


Jesstietjen 1 / -  
Nov 2, 2011   #1
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Help me please!

In a 300- 500 word essay please describe the most significant experience in your life. Topics may include, but are not limited to: serious fashion interest and experience, employment, extracurricular activies, and special circumstances.

328 words

The piercing whistle of the train echoed my surrounding. There I was with my struggling grasp on an enormous rolling suitcase sprinting to the train plat form just in time. I leaped onto the train to Penn Station and running over a few innocent travelers in the process and sat and observed reflections of strangers from the window. Upon myself, I saw an innocent child looking back at me. I gave her a quick smile and turned away. I was alone then with an enormous suit case until the train made its final destination. As I sat on the train my excited nerves started to kick in

As I stepped out of Penn station I saw a line of taxi drivers waiting for a single to welcome their next customers. All students had to be at the resident house by three p.m and it was 2:40 pm. I looked overjoyed as I stepped into the taxi. When I arrived at the resident house at 2:58 pm, I thought that the doors would be locked and I wouldn't be able to check into my dorm. I arrived at the dorm house, the diver helped me unload my luggage and I looked at the building where I would spend the next week. I opened the door and the lobby was full of fashion lab students who would soon be with me for a whole week. I was excited when a dorm consular holding a sign that said LIM FASHION LAB announced to line up with ID and appropriate papers. After filling out and handing in papers I was given a key to my dorm.

Upon walking into my dorm, turning on the light I found 3 beds, 3 desks and 3 closets. I then realized that this would be where I would be living on my own for the next week with people from different states or different countries. I knew that this is where I would like to learn more about fashion.
EF_Susan - / 2,364 12  
Nov 4, 2011   #2
The piercing whistle of the train echoed my though my surroundings .

There I was with my struggling grasp on an enormous rolling suitcase sprinting to the train platformjust in time.

I leaped onto the train to Penn Statio n,
and running over a few innocent travelers in the process, and sat and observed reflections of strangers in the window.

As I stepped out of Penn station I saw a line of taxi drivers waiting for a signal to welcome their next customers.

I felt overjoyed as I stepped into the taxi.

I arrived at the dorm house, the driver helped me unload my luggage and I looked at the building where I would spend the next week.

I opened the door and the lobby was full of fashion lab students who would soon be with me for the whole week.

I was excited when a dorm consular holding a sign that said LIM FASHION LAB announced that we should line up with ID and appropriate papers.

Have fun and good luck with school!

:)


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