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About you Q1: Reasons for choosing your program and Waterloo
Please tell us about your educational goals, your interest in your chosen program(s), and your reasons for applying to the University of Waterloo. If you have applied to more than one program, please discuss your interest in each program. (900-character limit)
At a young age, I developed a strong interest in both computer software and math, as I grow older, I am more and more fascinated with the mathematical theory of algorithms used in computer softwares, as well as the design and analysis of software. I imagine myself as someone who will not only witness, but also be a part of the accelerating technological evolution of the world, through the involvement of scientific research labs like LHC, or being part of company's research team that pushes the limits of the human race. UWaterloo's prestigious Math and Engineering Faculty will not only provide me with world class education and invaluable co-op experience, but also allow me to compete and cooperate with some of the most hard-working and intelligent people. UWaterloo acts as an arena for individuals like me to thrive through competition, giving me the skills and knowledge to reach my dream.