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Meliora motto - R.I.T. ( ROCHESTER ) - Describe what's leading you to apply.



ana523 3 / 2  
Dec 31, 2013   #1
The University of Rochester offers many rare advantages, building from our "Meliora" ("ever-better") motto that has inspired generations of scholars, professionals, and artists. Describe what's leading you to apply, and what

kind of "Meliora" experiences you want to have here at Rochester and beyond.

Like Rochester's motto "Meliora" I want to become something better than I am. My aspirations are to stretch my skills and understanding of my environment, the world in which I take up space. Rochester provides programs in which students are allowed to explore realms they never thought they would e possible to go into. This is a school where one is not put into one category of what they can do but given the freedom to explore so many elements of their flourishing education. It's an ideal environment where a student is looked at as a human being, one that is multi-faceted. My greatest wish is that I will be able to enjoy the journey of exploring the many layers that make me, well me. That it will be a place that won't crush my sense of wonder but be the mover to it. Rochester provides many opportunities, such as having a dual degree. This is something I aspire to have. Rochester offers just the ideal size class, where professor can better interacts with their students and students with their professors. Rochester is the school for me because it is there where I will be pushed to follow my interests. They offer a community where no matter what field one is in, they teach you how one field is linked to another. This gives rare opportunities to be involved in projects and activities where people from different fields come together to better each other in their own field. What attracted me the most about Rochester is that it is a school that does not offers leftovers of what students before have left behind from their education. Rochester is a school that works towards taking those leftovers and making them into something new and valuable to their future generations of undergraduates.

anvarashurov717 - / 2  
Dec 31, 2013   #2
I am not really sure if you are an international student or native. But you MUST re-read your essay! I know that you can fix your own mistakes because it feels like you wrote it but you did not read it yet. Always read it several times, mistakes and logical errors will be apparent. I read mine 16 times :D .

*there are grammar mistakes and logical errors ( the sentence you wrote is not expressing what you are thinking it is )


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