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MELIORA essay of Rochester. Meliora: ''Ever better'' - The University's motto



moon05 13 / 132  
Nov 27, 2012   #1
PROMPT:Meliora: ''Ever better'' - The University's motto directs our focus toward continual improvement through learning, discovery, creativity, and enterprising collaborations among people with different points of view. Describe a ''Meliora'' experience from your life. (1000 Characters)

It's now 1,150 characters. Need to shorten it a little bit and of course further improvement is also needed. Please help.

Always amazed with celestial stuff I waited long to get in high school so that I would get the opportunity to study Physics and get hoards of knowledge in Astronomy. But alas our Physics course had very limited readings on Astronomy! Later on while searching in a library I found the book "For the Love of Physics" by Walter Lewin. I didn't know that this would be a life changing reading for me. So, coming back home I finished it as fast as I could with huge excitement. It was stuffed with so much knowledge on celestial objects and happenings that I felt, although my course didn't have enough astronomy topics I had gained enough knowledge through outside reading.

Later I discovered that even that wasn't enough because all there was in the book, was just the basics of a Astronomy and to keep myself improving in this subject I had to do further reading. From then I kept searching on the internet and kept reading what ever I found interesting, expanding the circumference of my knowledge. Still I am carrying out this endeavor of "Astronomy reading" to be ever better in my desired subject of study. That is the Meliora experience of my life.

dumi 1 / 6795  
Nov 28, 2012   #2
I finished it as fast as I could with huge excitement . It was stuffed with so much knowledge on celestial objects and happenings that I felt, although my course didn't have enough astronomy topicsI had gainedenoughknowledge through outside reading.satisfied my curiosity at that time.

Later I discovered that even that wasn't enough because all there wasthat were in the book, was just the basics of a Astronomy and to keep myself improving in this subject I had to do further reading. From then I kept searching on the internet and kept reading what ever I found interesting,expandingexpanded the circumference of my knowledge sphere.
OP moon05 13 / 132  
Nov 28, 2012   #3
Thanks for the shortening. I already shortened it but it wasn't fitting the limit, your help made that possible :D

If you could then please help with the 1st supplement essay. After you asked, I posted what I am interested do my research on.
That one I haven't been done fitting in the 1,000 characters limit.
dumi 1 / 6795  
Nov 28, 2012   #4
Hi,

Sorry about my delayed response : )

Always amazed with celestial stuffobjects I waited long to get in high school so that I would get thefor an opportunity to study Physics and get hoards of knowledge in Astronomy. But alasto my disappointmentour Physics course had very limited readings onthe high school Physics course offered limited knowledge on this subjectAstronomy!Later on while searching in a libraryHowever, as a result of my endless interest, I found the book "For the Love of Physics" by Walter Lewin. I didn't know that this would be a life changing reading for me. So, coming back home I finished it as fast as I could.I was so fascinated by the facts I found there onIt was stuffed with so much knowledge on cosmological aspects and happenings that I finished reading it as fast as I could.I read it over and over again.

Later I discovered that even that wasn't enough because all that were in the book, wasthe book contained onlyjust the basics of a Astronomy and to keep myself improvingacquire more knowledge in this subject I had to do further reading. From then I kept searching on the internet and expanded the circumference of my knowledge sphere. Still I am carrying out this endeavor of "Astronomy reading" to be ever better in my desired subject of studyI crave for more advanced knowledge on Astronomy.That is the Meliora experience of my life.I believe Meliora experience would help me quench this Astronomical thirst of mine.
OP moon05 13 / 132  
Nov 30, 2012   #5
Many Many Many Many... Thanks for the editing. I was so busy with other work that I couldn't visit here and see update. Sorry for delaying in saying thanks!!!


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