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This is my short Essay for the common application. Please give me some suggestions. Thanks a lot~!
In April 2009, I participated in the "XX Model UN Conference" as the chief editor of the official conference publication "XX" and the assistant director of the Press Delegation. In the day, I lead a press team to roam around different committees to jot down events, conduct interviews and take photographs. At night, while the press delegation wrote articles, I edited the newspaper for the next day.
It was a monotonous and soporific task to sit in front of the computer to edit the articles, yet a surge of responsibility kept me awake. After long hours of work, I was relieved to see the paper fresh out of the printer. When I see delegates reading the paper at the breakfast table, quoting the interview with each other before committee sessions, and scanning the paper only to exclaim at the photograph of their committee, I felt a sense of accomplishment, which transformed my fatigue to a momentum to edit a better newspaper.
This is my short Essay for the common application. Please give me some suggestions. Thanks a lot~!
In April 2009, I participated in the "XX Model UN Conference" as the chief editor of the official conference publication "XX" and the assistant director of the Press Delegation. In the day, I lead a press team to roam around different committees to jot down events, conduct interviews and take photographs. At night, while the press delegation wrote articles, I edited the newspaper for the next day.
It was a monotonous and soporific task to sit in front of the computer to edit the articles, yet a surge of responsibility kept me awake. After long hours of work, I was relieved to see the paper fresh out of the printer. When I see delegates reading the paper at the breakfast table, quoting the interview with each other before committee sessions, and scanning the paper only to exclaim at the photograph of their committee, I felt a sense of accomplishment, which transformed my fatigue to a momentum to edit a better newspaper.
