Motion graphics and animation - sop for ugrad

Although my educational background was in general science, I've always had a deep curiosity and passion for art. This love for creativity was a constant part of me, which ultimately led me to pursue graphic designing in my bachelor's. It felt like the perfect way to combine my scientific understanding with my artistic interests, allowing me to express ideas visually and led my future towards motion graphics and animation.

I have always been an energetic, enthusiastic, creative and active student since my childhood . but I don't want to limit my thoughts and skills to my degree instead i . want to explore other social activities which led me to be an active volunteer in different organizations . I have currently work with Al -khidmat foundation .I am also doing an internship as an graphic designer at Digital Empowerment Pakistan .working with these organizations helped me to build my interpersonal and leadership skills.

Pursuing motion graphics and animation aligns perfectly with my future goals, as this field is in high demand. Studying in the US offers unparalleled opportunities to learn from market experts, network globally, and experience diverse cultures. The US is an ideal destination to gain insights into the Western education system, stay updated on market trends, and study alongside international students.
I am dedicated to implement my skills and serve to tech economy and community of Pakistan to boost my mother land economy .

The requirement for this statement is to present a clear purpose for your application. However, your essay falls short of that presentation. It is more of a biography than a purpose presentation. The focus of the essay should be on 3 aspects: personal reason for pursuing motion graphics and animation (self fulfillment), academic (passion for learning), and professional (why you see this as your career and what your plans are should you complete the course). These are the aspects that complete your purpose for studies. An additional reference to the purpose of applying to this university in particular would be appreciated by the reviewer. It shows that you did your research and have chosen the university based on merit instead of easily scanned online information. Reasons for studying in the US must be career related as well.

@Holt
yes but its an culture exchange program .