Pls. critique my essay
My idol is a kid's cartoon character who sports whisker marks and wears an orange jacket every episode. I am a very forgetful person and sometimes, I get a little messy. These are a few things that describe me, but in detail, they reveal a profound insight into my character.
I love to watch anime because they produce characters with very exaggerated personalities. In fact, I admire naruto the most because of that. Due to housing the nine-tailed fox, he suffered prejudice and loneliness through his childhood. Yet he believes in the Will of Fire: a philosophy of unstoppable determination and drive that has caused him to develop acknowledgement from his friends and enemies. Sometimes, I repeat YouTube videos of his emotional moments to fuel my own motivations in life.
However, I have also inherited Naruto's inattentiveness. Sometimes, I neglect other events because I focus too intensely on one addicting task. From school work to final projects, the unpredictability on what I was going to forget next convinced me to write on my planner. Now, I focus on two tasks: working hard on my goals, and remembering to look at my planner.
Sometimes, in my own Naruto seriousness, I ignore the disordered stacks of homework papers that might leave the room a little messy. I swear it is only because I am busy with other work. When I notice the slight disorder, I will immediately panic and bring out the vacuum.
To my roommate, expect a naruto smile that hides the loneliness. Expect a person that rarely heeds social standings. In fact, from repeated listens, you will eventually remember a great genin ninja quote: "Believe it."