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In addition to any work experience that you listed on your application, please tell us how you spent your most recent summer vacation.
This summer, I interned for a nonprofit organization that networks state law enforcement with the Asian community. As a coordinator for the police advisory committee, I spearheaded a project that integrated many New Jersey high schools into the program. I also met with various politicians, such as Governor Corzine and the Senator Lautenberg, to learn more about upper-level politics and its effects on ethnic affairs. I was delighted that I could help ensure a voice for the minority community.
(Should I change the last sentence to "I AM delighted"?)
If you had the opportunity to spend one day in New York City with a famous New Yorker, who would it be and what would you do? (Your New Yorker can be anyone -past or present, fictional or nonfictional - who is commonly associated with New York City; they do not necessarily have to have been born and raised in New York.
With my drumsticks and Satchmo's trumpet, Louis Armstrong and I would make a dynamic pair. My musicianship isn't quite "on par" with the legendary trumpeter, but I'm sure we'll have no trouble debuting at the jazz clubs in Harlem. I'd love to spend the entire day playing with Mr. Armstrong, but performing is only half the story.
Listening to R&B and Hip-hop at the Apollo is the other must. I'm sure that upon listening, Satchmo will be thrilled to discover that he's a father of modern music.
*Satchmo is Armstrong's nickname. (I definitely want to include this, but the character limit is a nuisance.)
I'm at the max for each.
In addition to any work experience that you listed on your application, please tell us how you spent your most recent summer vacation.
This summer, I interned for a nonprofit organization that networks state law enforcement with the Asian community. As a coordinator for the police advisory committee, I spearheaded a project that integrated many New Jersey high schools into the program. I also met with various politicians, such as Governor Corzine and the Senator Lautenberg, to learn more about upper-level politics and its effects on ethnic affairs. I was delighted that I could help ensure a voice for the minority community.
(Should I change the last sentence to "I AM delighted"?)
If you had the opportunity to spend one day in New York City with a famous New Yorker, who would it be and what would you do? (Your New Yorker can be anyone -past or present, fictional or nonfictional - who is commonly associated with New York City; they do not necessarily have to have been born and raised in New York.
With my drumsticks and Satchmo's trumpet, Louis Armstrong and I would make a dynamic pair. My musicianship isn't quite "on par" with the legendary trumpeter, but I'm sure we'll have no trouble debuting at the jazz clubs in Harlem. I'd love to spend the entire day playing with Mr. Armstrong, but performing is only half the story.
Listening to R&B and Hip-hop at the Apollo is the other must. I'm sure that upon listening, Satchmo will be thrilled to discover that he's a father of modern music.
*Satchmo is Armstrong's nickname. (I definitely want to include this, but the character limit is a nuisance.)