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'Obtaining a background in the computing industry' - Cornell Supplmentary



koreanincambo 6 / 11  
Oct 15, 2012   #1
Tell us about an engineering idea you have, or about your interest in engineering. Describe how your ideas and interests may be realized by - and linked to - specific resources within the College of Engineering. Finally, explain what a Cornell Engineering education will enable you to accomplish.

To be honest, I do not have a specific, brilliant engineering idea right now. If I did have a groundbreaking idea, I would not be writing this essay here at this moment. However, I can proudly state that my strong passion for math and physics help me to develop the rigorous skills I need for computer science. Aware of this, I dedicate a lot of my personal time to excel in these subject areas that I feel very passionate about. In addition, I have been studying independently computer sciences on top of my school requirement. Because the education at Cornell Computer Science department offers solid bases and theoretical education, I am sure that I will eventually be struck with an idea that will bring great changes. Because the 21st century is the age of information, protecting one's data and information will be crucial. I want to make a difference, bringing innovations just like the ones that I saw in the video that inspired me to pursue this course.

The established system at Cornell will give me a firm background at the computing industry, and I will be able to use this strong background to bring creations that are both conceptually well-built and innovative. Specifically, as my belief is that the faculty is the best resource a student can access in a school, I will often be soliciting help from the faculty members in the department of Computer Science, and I am looking forward to receive the advising and the counseling services along with using the Engineering Learning Initiatives. The research opportunities available at Cornell is also great, with the excellent corporate relations, therefore I plan to grab any and all opportunities that are shown to me at Cornell.

admission2012 - / 475  
Oct 15, 2012   #2
Dear Cornell. Please let me into your medical school. I don't know if I really want to be a doctor or even if I want to do anything with medicine, but I am really good in biology. I got an A+ in two semesters of biology. Maybe one day I will discover the cure for a major disease. Please let me in despite the thousands of other overly qualified students that have studied for years to be there. Thanks in advance. I hope this short essay exemplifies how shallow your essay here is. If you want to study computer science, there must be at least ONE area of computer science that really intrigues you. Talk about that. The essay prompt also asks you to explain an interest. You should use your essay real estate to talk about an interest in computer science you have and how Cornell and it's vast resources can help you explore it.. -admissionsadviceonline
Jane123 1 / 3  
Oct 16, 2012   #3
add a short story. what contributes to your huge interest in engineering? just one or two sentence is enough, but the essay will look more vivid.

It's already great now.

Good Luck :D


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