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Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to apply for the student exchange program. Today I am a second - year student of Transport and Energy faculty at *** University. I knew that my parents would not were able to afford me paid education abroad, because of that fact I was in search of different programs for free tuition. And now Eurasian National University gives me an opportunity to participate in an exchange program. Consequently, I have a golden possibility to study abroad and achieve my goal.
After finishing school I had to make a decision to choose university and my future profession. My majors were Physics and Mathematics and at that moment I understood what interest I have and I realized what kind of subjects I learn with pleasure. So I chose technical specialty Transport technology in one of the prestigious university of ***(country). And today I understand that I made a right choice. Thanks to good education in **** University my interests in engineering and in transport technology only grew up. Moreover, I pick up my knowledge in a sphere of transport technology. In addition, I have been working and studying hard since I started the university.
I would like to explain you why I want to take a part in this exchange program. We are living in age of fast paste development where is necessary to know foreign languages. Firstly, my main target is getting an adequate knowledge in foreign language for being a bilingual expert. In addition it is a possibility to share with knowledge with other countries. Furthermore, studying in foreign university can give me a perfect opportunity to take courses in foreign language that are not taught at my university. In my opinion, I should learn more interesting subjects, if I want to be well-qualified and high-educated professional. As I know, this program gives a wide selection of universities which provide additional courses and interesting classes.
Secondly, I think that studying abroad is not only getting knowledge, but also discovering something new. One of my desires is meeting different people of different nationalities, cultures and also with different lifestyles and points of view. The diversity will broaden my horizons and help me to feel myself a member of the global community. All of these would be a big life experience and as we know experience is the best teacher.
In conclusion I want to say that exchange students program would give me to fulfill my potential and would help me to achieve a goal to be a bilingual expert of my job.
Thank you for your time and consideration.
Sincerely,
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to apply for the student exchange program. Today I am a second - year student of Transport and Energy faculty at *** University. I knew that my parents would not were able to afford me paid education abroad, because of that fact I was in search of different programs for free tuition. And now Eurasian National University gives me an opportunity to participate in an exchange program. Consequently, I have a golden possibility to study abroad and achieve my goal.
After finishing school I had to make a decision to choose university and my future profession. My majors were Physics and Mathematics and at that moment I understood what interest I have and I realized what kind of subjects I learn with pleasure. So I chose technical specialty Transport technology in one of the prestigious university of ***(country). And today I understand that I made a right choice. Thanks to good education in **** University my interests in engineering and in transport technology only grew up. Moreover, I pick up my knowledge in a sphere of transport technology. In addition, I have been working and studying hard since I started the university.
I would like to explain you why I want to take a part in this exchange program. We are living in age of fast paste development where is necessary to know foreign languages. Firstly, my main target is getting an adequate knowledge in foreign language for being a bilingual expert. In addition it is a possibility to share with knowledge with other countries. Furthermore, studying in foreign university can give me a perfect opportunity to take courses in foreign language that are not taught at my university. In my opinion, I should learn more interesting subjects, if I want to be well-qualified and high-educated professional. As I know, this program gives a wide selection of universities which provide additional courses and interesting classes.
Secondly, I think that studying abroad is not only getting knowledge, but also discovering something new. One of my desires is meeting different people of different nationalities, cultures and also with different lifestyles and points of view. The diversity will broaden my horizons and help me to feel myself a member of the global community. All of these would be a big life experience and as we know experience is the best teacher.
In conclusion I want to say that exchange students program would give me to fulfill my potential and would help me to achieve a goal to be a bilingual expert of my job.
Thank you for your time and consideration.
Sincerely,
