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The performing and visual arts - Which extracurriculars will you pursue at JHU?



HarvestBristle 6 / 11  
Nov 20, 2010   #1
A Typical student at Johns Hopkins spends less than 15 hours each week in a classroom, leaving lots of time for volunteer opportunities, clubs and organizations, athletics, social events, and other on- and off-campus activities. Aside from the academic interests you've already expressed, in what activities do you plan to engage as an undergraduate at Johns Hopkins?

I feel that I need a dynamic college experience that fits my varied interests. While in high school, I partook in a multitude of theatre productions which have been both challenging and enjoyable and I look forward to continuing this passion for the performing and visual arts through Homewood Art Workshops and participation in the Johns Hopkins Theatre. While at Johns Hopkins, I also hope to further develop my current participation in volunteerism with civic engagement projects at the Center for Social Concern and the Student Outreach Resource Center (SOURCE); this is sure to nurture my ever-present love for community service and helping others in need. I'm currently spending my gap year helping doing what I love, which includes spending a significant amount of time participating in community service and providing first-hand aid to the homeless and drug addicted; I'd love to continue helping the homeless at JHU and ultimately broaden my civic impact to the Baltimore community. I'm also interested in manifesting even my most obscure interests, such as poetry, meditation and photography, and, with the chance of creating my own student-run club at John Hopkins, I'm sure to be given this opportunity. My time away from the classroom and my studies are sure to be filled to the brim with active participation in the great variety of programs and clubs provided at Johns Hopkins.

dramagrl1400 1 / 3  
Nov 21, 2010   #2
I look forward to continuing this passion for the performing and visual arts through Homewood Art Workshops and participation in the Johns Hopkins Theatre. While at Johns Hopkins, I also hope to further develop my current participation in volunteerism with civic engagement projects at the Center for Social Concern and the Student Outreach Resource Center (SOURCE);

Sounds great! Its good you talk about specifics at JH ^ above. Maybe, when you talk about making your own club, talk about what you want to start, it will add to the pursuit and also, how you will contribute to the school. :) Best of luck!
EF_Kevin 8 / 13052  
Nov 28, 2010   #3
partook

I think this word has no place in any essay, but that is my own prejudice...

I'm currently spending my gap year helping doing what I love: which includes spending a significant amount of time participating in community ...

I'm also interested in manifesting following even my most obscure interests, such as ---They already manifested.

Try to use fewer words to express your meaning. If you can make a point in 100 rhythmic, eloquent words, it is better than using 150 rhythmic, eloquent words. You are a good writer, and a lot of good writers tend to use more words than necessary.

:-)


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