Hi everyone, this my some first writing for undergraduate admission. I'm gonna apply to SP Jain.
I had to write no more than 250 words.
Prompts : Write about Exceptional Academic Achievement
Since i don't have any prestigious achievement in academic, i wrote about my struggle in physics.
I don't think it hit all the necessaries. I hope for your comment. Please let me know whether something need to be revised, as soon as possible, since i have to submit my aplication in a week.
Thanks a lot for your advance. :)
Education is the knowledge of putting one's potentials into maximum capacity. Human being is not in the proper level until they are educated. Each person has their own academic achievement. It can start from nothing into large amount, also it can be worthy to him but not for others. My achievement was when I finally got some highest scores on physics.
There is proverb say Opportunity follows struggle, it follows effort, it follows hard work, it doesn't come before. It applied here. High school and junior high, both of them have its speed, high school is faster. Once I went to this school, I had to adapt to its atmosphere, velocity in study, each teacher-teaching styles.
Physics - one of the subjects - was draining my mind. Actually, I'm not good at physics. It was not simple to learn all chapters, must keep a lot of formulas and theories in mind in short time. I had to find my new learning style in order to get easier in study, always paid attention when the teacher explained and be more active. Sometimes, it made me study until late in the night for understanding the lesson.
For physics, we couldn't easily understand by just reading the formula, we needed an explanation. There was an unpleasant teacher who rarely explained the lesson, made my difficulties in studying. Needed more fight in test-taking. Bad scores are common at first, ups and downs, must go through this. I made it eventually. Things were paid off.
I had to write no more than 250 words.
Prompts : Write about Exceptional Academic Achievement
Since i don't have any prestigious achievement in academic, i wrote about my struggle in physics.
I don't think it hit all the necessaries. I hope for your comment. Please let me know whether something need to be revised, as soon as possible, since i have to submit my aplication in a week.
Thanks a lot for your advance. :)
Education is the knowledge of putting one's potentials into maximum capacity. Human being is not in the proper level until they are educated. Each person has their own academic achievement. It can start from nothing into large amount, also it can be worthy to him but not for others. My achievement was when I finally got some highest scores on physics.
There is proverb say Opportunity follows struggle, it follows effort, it follows hard work, it doesn't come before. It applied here. High school and junior high, both of them have its speed, high school is faster. Once I went to this school, I had to adapt to its atmosphere, velocity in study, each teacher-teaching styles.
Physics - one of the subjects - was draining my mind. Actually, I'm not good at physics. It was not simple to learn all chapters, must keep a lot of formulas and theories in mind in short time. I had to find my new learning style in order to get easier in study, always paid attention when the teacher explained and be more active. Sometimes, it made me study until late in the night for understanding the lesson.
For physics, we couldn't easily understand by just reading the formula, we needed an explanation. There was an unpleasant teacher who rarely explained the lesson, made my difficulties in studying. Needed more fight in test-taking. Bad scores are common at first, ups and downs, must go through this. I made it eventually. Things were paid off.
