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While I was looking on the Internet for Colleges that accepted international students I found the University of Chicago. I knew that I wanted a college that, aside from the prestige, its history and location, could provide financial aid to those who can't afford it, give an opportunity to international student's, push their talent, give them opportunities and promote leadership, and for what I know so far Chicago has that.
More important than the college is the major I'm choosing; I'm diverse on the fields that I like and my options where Archaeology, Media Design or Biological Sciences, I wanted diversity. I choose to apply to those universities that had two of the options; luckily Chicago has Biological Sciences and Archaeology. I see UChicago as a challenge, and I like challenges because they force you to do your best and more than that, to learn from your mistakes and improve yourself, they make you reach your goals and this is what I want.
Not all the Universities possesses a sense of community, since I'll be studying outside my country I expect to feel like home there, meet other people and make friends, and to do different things for example: be on a sports or dance team, sign up to an extracurricular activity, be part of a research etc., and Chicago has it.
To be on the top is not easy, it requires effort and, more important than this, it requires passion, compromise and competitiveness. This is what I expect if I'm admitted, not only great education, an opportunity to pursue a Master degree and finding a job, but also leadership and developing of different abilities that can serve in my personal and professional life on any place around the world.
Thank you :D
While I was looking on the Internet for Colleges that accepted international students I found the University of Chicago. I knew that I wanted a college that, aside from the prestige, its history and location, could provide financial aid to those who can't afford it, give an opportunity to international student's, push their talent, give them opportunities and promote leadership, and for what I know so far Chicago has that.
More important than the college is the major I'm choosing; I'm diverse on the fields that I like and my options where Archaeology, Media Design or Biological Sciences, I wanted diversity. I choose to apply to those universities that had two of the options; luckily Chicago has Biological Sciences and Archaeology. I see UChicago as a challenge, and I like challenges because they force you to do your best and more than that, to learn from your mistakes and improve yourself, they make you reach your goals and this is what I want.
Not all the Universities possesses a sense of community, since I'll be studying outside my country I expect to feel like home there, meet other people and make friends, and to do different things for example: be on a sports or dance team, sign up to an extracurricular activity, be part of a research etc., and Chicago has it.
To be on the top is not easy, it requires effort and, more important than this, it requires passion, compromise and competitiveness. This is what I expect if I'm admitted, not only great education, an opportunity to pursue a Master degree and finding a job, but also leadership and developing of different abilities that can serve in my personal and professional life on any place around the world.