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I am unlikely one of the brightest and smartest students who get every award when graduation comes since my grade school years until high school. Procrastination was and always will be my greatest opponent. In grade school, I was the kind of student who does not do anything until the last minute. I was so hooked on social media. In fact, it was those years that Facebook was the latest trend among kids and adults. I would come home from school so giddy about going to update my status in FB and post multiple selfies of me and my dog. I would sometimes forget about the homework and project that I was assigned to do so I would copy my classmate's or I'll ask my sister to do it for me. That goes on until I faced what I was fearing all my life. There was this new student, my grade who we can call Ca, who came inside the school with my supposedly two-year best friend. I was known for having a mother who fund and donate in every program that the school has so that made me known by all the students in the school. And in that reason, the new kid's presence didn't bother me at all. Not until the mid-terms that I became aware of the treatment that the teachers and students are showing towards Ca. She got furious at me and competes with every activity there is. She gets every award and recognition in the school and what I always say was "Of course she'll get all the recognition, her mother's the principal and her father's a pastor." My hatred grew more as the time goes by. Until sixth grade that I've been so self-conscious and doubtful about myself. I started telling my mom to homeschool me and that I hate these people and I'm so sick of being betrayed by people who were once so close to me. I was able to keep hold of what I was feeling, I started concentrating on learning new things and not just study because of grades and pass the exams. For several months, I practiced doing what I was supposed to do on time and not procrastinate. I graduated primary school.
I changed my definition of success and failure in High School. I started joining a lot of clubs and organizations that will personally change me and make me a better person. I never thought that I am capable of doing the things so impossible and difficult until I tried.
I am unlikely one of the brightest and smartest students who get every award when graduation comes since my grade school years until high school. Procrastination was and always will be my greatest opponent. In grade school, I was the kind of student who does not do anything until the last minute. I was so hooked on social media. In fact, it was those years that Facebook was the latest trend among kids and adults. I would come home from school so giddy about going to update my status in FB and post multiple selfies of me and my dog. I would sometimes forget about the homework and project that I was assigned to do so I would copy my classmate's or I'll ask my sister to do it for me. That goes on until I faced what I was fearing all my life. There was this new student, my grade who we can call Ca, who came inside the school with my supposedly two-year best friend. I was known for having a mother who fund and donate in every program that the school has so that made me known by all the students in the school. And in that reason, the new kid's presence didn't bother me at all. Not until the mid-terms that I became aware of the treatment that the teachers and students are showing towards Ca. She got furious at me and competes with every activity there is. She gets every award and recognition in the school and what I always say was "Of course she'll get all the recognition, her mother's the principal and her father's a pastor." My hatred grew more as the time goes by. Until sixth grade that I've been so self-conscious and doubtful about myself. I started telling my mom to homeschool me and that I hate these people and I'm so sick of being betrayed by people who were once so close to me. I was able to keep hold of what I was feeling, I started concentrating on learning new things and not just study because of grades and pass the exams. For several months, I practiced doing what I was supposed to do on time and not procrastinate. I graduated primary school.
I changed my definition of success and failure in High School. I started joining a lot of clubs and organizations that will personally change me and make me a better person. I never thought that I am capable of doing the things so impossible and difficult until I tried.
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