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Producing props for drama! Common App- Extracurricular activities



Shoko0229 4 / 14  
Dec 19, 2012   #1
Prompt: Please briefly elaborate on one of your extracurricular activities or work experiences in the space below. (1000characters)

First, I imagined the ideal finish of the prop I was about to produce; what role would it play in the drama; what expression is it to convey to the audience? Then I considered how, how I could attain the goal only with old newspapers and cardboard, and paint and watercolor for coloring. I could not use almost anything priced because of the lack of fund of our drama club. This regulation seemed to me to be a critical barrier for our production at first, but it was really a period of freedom and originality that visited me at this moment. Thanks to our unspecialized materials, I had enormous possibilities to make my ideal come true with my own technique, experience, imagination, and creativity all freely and voluntarily combined. If I fail, I could simply try again. I tried, retried, and tried until I reached the end with tenacity and joy. Making props with simple stuff made me wholeheartedly indulge myself in my ideal and spontaneously pursue it.

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I am worried it might give an impression that I am a perfectionist, but I simply want to express the pleasure of working to make my ideal come true.

What do you guys think? Is it working?
Also, any gramatical corrections and wording improvement is welcome!
Thank you!

linting2012 10 / 78  
Dec 19, 2012   #2
Shoko, thank you so much for helping my essay, so here I am to help yours too.

However I don't think I can help much, this essay is great. For me, you don't come across as a perfectionist at all. I feel more of your passion towards creating the props.

Good luck
OP Shoko0229 4 / 14  
Dec 20, 2012   #3
Thanks linting2012!


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