My profile is interesting - I write about introducing myself

Introduce myself
My profile is interesting. First, My name is Praewpan Sangduan, you can call me Praew. I am 21 years old. I graduated from Satrinonthaburi School and I studied about English-Japanese program. Now I am studying at Rajamangala University of Technology Thanyaburi or RMUTT. I am a junior studying in Faculty of Liberal Arts in field is English for communicate. Why I choose to be an English major. In my opinion because English subject that I love this subject since I was primary student. English language that is formal language. The most people around the world use English for communicate that thing do you want with foreigners. I will go to travel after I graduated from university, but I had to go to work immediately. In my future I want to be a fight attendant or work about in the airport such as air ground. I live in Nonthaburi, and I round trip from my house, but I do not live in dormitory because I am a homesick. I am an only child. I am pets lovers, and my house has one cat. It name is "Tiger". I always listen music, when I have free time. Lastly, I hope to give you enjoy your life and you never miss the opportunity to follow your dreams.

Hi Praewpan.
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Introduce INTRODUCING myself

First, My name is Praewpan Sangduan, AND you can call me Praew.
... School and I HAD studied about A PROGRAM OF English-Japanese program .
... in Faculty of Liberal Arts in field is English for communicate WITH USING ENGLISH IN LECTURE. Why I choose to be an A MAJOR OF English major. In my opinion because English HAS BEEN A subject that I love this subject since I was primary A student OF A PRIMARY SCHOOL. English language that is formal language.

... around the world use English for TO communicate that thing do you want with foreigners.
... but I had to go to work WORKING immediately.
... I want to be a fight FLIGHT attendant or work about ...
I live in Nonthaburi, and I round trip from(...) not live in A dormitory because I am a homesick.
I am ONE OF THE pet'S lovers, and my house ...
ItS name is "Tiger". I always listen TO music, when I ...

Note: You need to place linking words appropriately so that readers are not confused when your writing move from a topic to another topic.
Hopefully, those can help you
Good Luck,

Thank you so much,which you improve my essay writing.

Hi Praew, WELCOME to the Essay Forum Team, I hope you find this website to be valuable and a good resource for you to come up with an even stronger essay. We ai to provide you with the most accurate and necessary feedback to strengthen your essay.

Having said that, below are additional modifications for your essay, oh, before I do so, just a gentle reminder, when you do an introduction, be yourself, be confident, proud of who you are at the same time, keeping your essay formal.

- My profile is quiet interesting.
- First, My name is Praewpan Sangduan, you can call me Praew.
- and I studied about English-Japanese program.
- I am a junior studying in the Faculty of
- Why I choose to be an English major?
- In my opinion becauseI believe English
- subject is the subject that I love this subject
- since I was in primary student .
- English language that is a formal language.
- The mostMost people
- I graduated from university,
- In my future I want to be a fl ight attendant
- or work about in the airport such
- as air ground support .

There you have it Praew, this is just half of your essay, as I go through it, there's quiet a lot tension in your essay and as I suggested, be confident especially when you're introducing yourself.

I hope you follow through with the corrections and the given modifications and I wish to review your final essay soon.