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I often pick up a HB pencil and start putting my thoughts into a lively two - dimensional sketch. Although I often am criticized for doing so while I study, however, I always spare myself a chance to do so. The misleading lingual concept ends somewhere at a picture on the sideline of the paragraph in my textbooks. Pick any of my books and you'll find lot of pictures, I use them to aid my memory. However in my free time I often find a quite place near the haphazard pathways, under the shady tree, besides the lake to sit and fill a blank A4 printing paper with something interesting, which represents my thought. I often wake up early, pick up my bike and start for the early morning drive towards the Sikandra Tomb which is not far away from my home. Sitting on a bench, there I often look for ideas that would help me create my next masterpiece. I often challenge myself with the hardest of the ways to sketch and draw. One such instance that comes in my mind is of my farewell ceremony which was celebrated at my school; I gifted portraits to my friends and teachers as a memento of the time spent together. I hope this skill of mine does help me in my future endeavors at my university and ever after.
I often pick up a HB pencil and start putting my thoughts into a lively two - dimensional sketch. Although I often am criticized for doing so while I study, however, I always spare myself a chance to do so. The misleading lingual concept ends somewhere at a picture on the sideline of the paragraph in my textbooks. Pick any of my books and you'll find lot of pictures, I use them to aid my memory. However in my free time I often find a quite place near the haphazard pathways, under the shady tree, besides the lake to sit and fill a blank A4 printing paper with something interesting, which represents my thought. I often wake up early, pick up my bike and start for the early morning drive towards the Sikandra Tomb which is not far away from my home. Sitting on a bench, there I often look for ideas that would help me create my next masterpiece. I often challenge myself with the hardest of the ways to sketch and draw. One such instance that comes in my mind is of my farewell ceremony which was celebrated at my school; I gifted portraits to my friends and teachers as a memento of the time spent together. I hope this skill of mine does help me in my future endeavors at my university and ever after.
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