Quality education, advanced knowledge - reasons and effects for studying abroad

Hi,
Please, i need your support to correct it and your advise about it:

Students are attracted to foreign countries because it is a chance to have high quality education, absorb new and advanced knowledge. Students try to find good studying environment in order to secure their future and to get good education. Availability of professional teaching staff and developed laboratories in developed countries will enhance their knowledge. In addition, students try to abroad for studying outside their countries due to some of programs and courses are rare and not available in their country. For example; the Nano material is new science and not available in my country therefore I preferred to study this science outside my country. Also when students get degree from well renowned university from abroad, this will help them to have advantage for the competition in jobs. So studying abroad enhances students' knowledge, develops their education and enriches their CV.

Thank you
Best regards

Mohannad S. Hammadi

Students try to find a proper studying environment in order to secure their future and to get a good education.
In addition, students try to travel abroad for studying outside their countries due to because some of programs and courses are rare and not available in their country.

For example; the Nano material nanotechnology is a new science and not available in my country
Also when students get degrees from well renowned universities from abroad
This will provide them with an advantage when competing in the job market.

Good work Mohannad but there are a couple of mistakes shown above in my editing! Good luck with your studying :)
Greetings from Egypt!

Thank you very much,
but what about the other is it good?
Thanks again

What other? You mean another essay in a different thread?

...because it is a chance to have high quality education and to absorb new and advanced knowledge. Students try to find good studying environments in order to secure their future and to get good education.

Good sentence: So studying abroad enhances students' knowledge, develops their education and enriches their CV.

:-)