Running as the mental challenge - common application short answers feedback/edit

common application's extra-curricular activity short answer in less than 150 words. Mine is on running.
I'm at 151...!!>.< Is that okay? Or are admission officers really really strict on that limit?

Please briefly elaborate on one of your extracurricular activities or work experiences in the space below (150 words or fewer).

I started running when I found out about my abnormally high heart rate. I didn't exactly enjoy running, but I persisted for the sake of my health.

As I soon found out, running is not just about stamina; it's about mental endurance as much as physical strength. When I feel out of breath or overwhelmed by fatigue, only by sheer mental strength could I focus, calm down my rhythm, and urge my body to go on. With this discovery, I started to push myself both physically and psychologically. Soon I started to love the mental challenge that running poses, and my ability to focus is noticeably improved in daily tasks. I've developed a stronger heart and a tougher mind.

Now, I can't picture my life without running. It made me realize how much potential I possess if I only persevere. I hope to cultivate this potential in my life's deepest commitments.

Thanks for editing:)

Hi HuiQing,

I am not sure about the word limit. I would assume that if you have 151 words, that they would accept that, as it is only over by one word. It would seem to me that if you had more than five words over the limit, then they would probably say something to you.

You essay looks and reads great! I think you did a good job with the prompt, as well as the word count.

Mark

Now, I can't picture my life without Running made me realize how much potential I possess can actualize if I only persevere.

:-)

thanks for the feedback!