I am running for secretary in my FFA class end this is my essay

secretery candidate - vote for me!

Hi my name is --------------- and I am running for secretary. Why should you vote for me is probably what your thinking. What are the skills that make up a secretary. What makes me think I have them. Honestly I don't know and I would assume the answer varies between people. I would also it varies among places, so I suppose the question should be what skills make up a secretary for the FFA. The most important thing for any secretary is probably good communication and to be good at keeping track of things. Now to fully answer that question what the FFA stands for. Most of you probably are thinking it's just an agricultural class which it is, but it's also is much more. They should probably be somewhat good with the animals. You don't want one that sits around watching everyone else do everything. You definitely don't want someone who's never prepared. I know I still haven't told you why you should vote for me. I could've came up here and told why I am the best choice, but in the end of the day I can't force you to vote for me. All I can do is tell you what to think about when you vote. The things to consider. I know you probably want to vote for your friends and I'm not going to tell you not to. Just consider the things a secretary of the FFA should have and if they have them.

Luis, this is not a very good campaign speech. If you do not know what your good qualities are that will make you a good secretary, then why are you running for secretary? You cannot run on probables. You need to be certain that you have what you believe to be the best qualities and traits of a secretary for your organization. You need to have a sense of conviction in your statements. Certainty in your abilities is a must, and a desire to win over the voters, whom you know will be voting for other people are a must in your speech. Whatever you do, do not tell them it is okay to not vote for you. It isn't ok that they vote for their friends. Sell them on the idea that you are the better alternative and that their friends have shortcomings when it comes to the possibility of discharging their duties as secretary. Make yourself sound like the only viable candidate. Make sure you come across as the only candidate who can fulfill the job of secretary. I do not get a sense of your abilities to actually discharge the duties of this office because of your weak speech presentation. Use the pronoun I and make declarations instead of suppositions in your sentences. Each paragraph needs to be a strong statement instead of a weak plea for votes.