fostered scientific research is
...fostered scientific research is"how scientific research is fostered"
...Twins Cities allows
nearly endless ...allows nearly endless
...students research projects ...students' research projects
...available like the Student-Faculty Summer Research collaboration, the Beckman Foundation, etc. ...available, like
In the words of Marie Curie: "A scientist in his laboratory is not only a technician
he is also a child placed before natural phenomena which impresses
him like a fairy tale." I am also among those who think science is just as magical as any fairy tale
and how can I not? The entire genomes of every living organism
made up from only four different bases of DNA in various arrangements
; our. Our
every thought and action
down to the firing of neurons; activities of the minuscule molecule called enzyme in the cells
are what keeping me alivethat keep one alive
; and countless more phenomena that await the analysis of the human minds...(new paragraph)
Being in a research laboratory for me is an exploration of the magic of life. Being at Macalester, subsequently, will give me so many chances to do just that. Internships programs facilitated by the Academic Internship Programs are abundant as well. Having such wonderful opportunities for research and internship will teach me how to integrate theoretical knowledge gained in classrooms and apply such knowledge in a real world setting, which I believe is the integral part of a well-rounded education.
Academic goals aside, I am optimistic
to thriveabout thriving
in this diverse community.
...with joining organization such as... ...with joining organizations such as...
and involve numerous civic engagement programs. Such multitude of avenues on campus will allow for self-discovery as well as shaping and solidifying my identity as a Macalester student....and being involved...Such a multitude...shape and solidify...
When given the chance, I expect to make the most out of my time at Macalester College.Love this line! That's what I was getting out of this essay too!
It is a school where a vast array of opportunities for research and internships are available and still
for close relationships with members for the faculty
where a wide range of extracurricular activities will help me discover myself while being an active member on campus who seeks to give back to the community.Great going, Cordyceps! Just watch the little articles like "the, a, of," from time to time in your text. You have provided quite a bit of examples and support for what you will do at Macalester, and in addition, your essay shows that you have done some research and put the thought about how this experience can benefit you so you can benefit your community. Good luck!