What about Scripps College has inspired you to apply? (200 words)
When I first heard about Scripps College, I immediately dismissed it for being an all-women school. However, I was interested in its sibling schools Pomona and Claremont McKenna and planned a visit to Claremont to learn more about them. Since Scripps was nearby, I registered for a campus tour and information session for Scripps as well.
What I saw there surprised me. Scripps exceeded my expectations and showed me the true worth of a women's college, notably greater leadership opportunities and a supportive environment. Besides, Scripps is unique in that it is part of the Claremont Colleges; I could enjoy the support and community of a small college while experiencing the diversity and multitude of opportunities that a bigger co-ed university would offer.
After the tour, I decided to explore the campus and the Claremont college town while walking back to the hotel I was staying at with my family. When I saw the Graffiti Wall I imagined myself painting on it after graduating from Scripps. Then, I saw the colorfully quaint houses where graduate students and professors lived that beckoned to me and whispered of the lively intellectual life they harbored. And I was hooked.
word count: 195
--- Does the last sentence sound weird?
--- Any suggestions are welcome! :)
When I first heard about Scripps College, I immediately dismissed it for being an all-women school. However, I was interested in its sibling schools Pomona and Claremont McKenna and planned a visit to Claremont to learn more about them. Since Scripps was nearby, I registered for a campus tour and information session for Scripps as well.
What I saw there surprised me. Scripps exceeded my expectations and showed me the true worth of a women's college, notably greater leadership opportunities and a supportive environment. Besides, Scripps is unique in that it is part of the Claremont Colleges; I could enjoy the support and community of a small college while experiencing the diversity and multitude of opportunities that a bigger co-ed university would offer.
After the tour, I decided to explore the campus and the Claremont college town while walking back to the hotel I was staying at with my family. When I saw the Graffiti Wall I imagined myself painting on it after graduating from Scripps. Then, I saw the colorfully quaint houses where graduate students and professors lived that beckoned to me and whispered of the lively intellectual life they harbored. And I was hooked.
word count: 195
--- Does the last sentence sound weird?
--- Any suggestions are welcome! :)