I am fond of sports, but I would have never imagined that love of some intellectual game would have ever replaced it. Out of curiosity, I signed in Intellect club ,which was held every thursday evening at school auditorium. We competed in logical reasoning, which showed me how powerful a human brain can be in guessing intricate questions depending only on empty hints. Every question was from a distinctive field and original in formulation, which was very amusing and involving as well. We urged our brains to fully use their virtuosity and efficiently, leading to answers we wouldn't even think about at the begining. Every meeting showed me the art of skillful thinking and its value. This was a sport of mind, which awakened full sense of competitiveness and activated dusty knowledge, which was passively resting in deep chambers of my brain. Those few hours of the club every week gave me a wonderful experience.
Please help me correct it and tell me if it is too shallow.
I am fond of sports, but I would have never imagined that love of some intellectual game would have ever replaced it.
This does not add much value for this answer and it only consumes words. ... talking about your love for sports has nothing to do with your extra curricular activity. You better insert some sentence that has more relevance to your activity.
I signed in Intellect club
I signed with Inteelect Club.
We competed in logical reasoning, which showed me how powerful a human brain can be in guessing intricate questions depending only on empty hints. Every question was from a distinctive field and original in formulation, which was very amusing and involving as well. We urged our brains to fully use their virtuosity and efficiently, leading to answers we wouldn't even think about at the begining
Why not tell all these through some event or experience that is rich enough to inform what you've said here. That would be more conceivable.
