Why Brown? 200 words.
Rough Draft:
Brown is like no other. Even among his Ivy League buddies Brown stands out as the quirky and funny friend, the one who's down to earth and gets along with everyone else. He offers his friends no judgment when they come to him with their problems, suggesting solutions that are not so easily recognized at first. Brown has a close knit group of friends because he likes the sense of community it gives him. He is the first to pose the most baffling of questions, tickling his friends' minds and making them really think for once. Brown is the companion who, without him, you would never go sky diving because the activity is out of your comfort zone. Sometimes you wonder if Brown has weird things like books bound with human skin hiding in his personal library (he does). Brown challenges you and makes you want to pull your hair out some days, but you remain loyal because he feeds your curiosity and always pushes you to explore what hasn't been explored before. There are no boundaries with Brown. He just wants to have his friends feel free and live their lives to the fullest.
Is it too out of the box? Should I be more straight foward and just answer normally? Is this worth polishing? Any feedback is much appreciated. Thank you!
Rough Draft:
Brown is like no other. Even among his Ivy League buddies Brown stands out as the quirky and funny friend, the one who's down to earth and gets along with everyone else. He offers his friends no judgment when they come to him with their problems, suggesting solutions that are not so easily recognized at first. Brown has a close knit group of friends because he likes the sense of community it gives him. He is the first to pose the most baffling of questions, tickling his friends' minds and making them really think for once. Brown is the companion who, without him, you would never go sky diving because the activity is out of your comfort zone. Sometimes you wonder if Brown has weird things like books bound with human skin hiding in his personal library (he does). Brown challenges you and makes you want to pull your hair out some days, but you remain loyal because he feeds your curiosity and always pushes you to explore what hasn't been explored before. There are no boundaries with Brown. He just wants to have his friends feel free and live their lives to the fullest.
Is it too out of the box? Should I be more straight foward and just answer normally? Is this worth polishing? Any feedback is much appreciated. Thank you!
