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"The Small Girl" - a person in the business world that has had an influence on you



ishakembhavi 1 / -  
Apr 16, 2011   #1
Hi!
As mentioned above, my topic is "Indicate a person in the business world that has had an influence on you"

The Small Girl with Big Dreams- Indra Nooyi

Growing up in the cultural heart of India, Chennai was a small girl with big dreams- Indra Nooyi. Ms Indra completed her education in India and went on to climb the stones of success while working at renowned firms such as Johnson & Johnson, Motorola, Asea Brown Boveri and many more.

Ms Nooyi joined PepsiCo in 1994 and was named President in 2001. She is seen as a highly influential person who lead PepsiCo to grow over the years, as it still rises new heights. Indra Nooyi has list of personal achievement under her wing, such as, being "The 3rd Most Powerful Women" by Forbes.

On a personal note, I am extremely influenced by Ms Nooyi, as she has ascended to this level because of her credence in, positive attitude, competency and passion, which she believes are the ingredients to success. Being a woman in the all-man's world requires an emotional stability, extreme hard work and dedication, which Ms Nooyi exhibits without any hindrance. She is looked at as very sociable and agreeable which is an important factor in our multicultural environment. She is ambitious and a great team leader, motivating workers all the time. Her sharp strategic mind and tremendous market insight are the roots of her successful profession.

Ms Nooyi's example teaches me, no matter how small I may seem now, if I pursue my dreams with dedication, hard work, passion and honesty, success is not far away!

EF_Kevin 8 / 13052  
Apr 19, 2011   #2
...as Johnson & Johnson, Motorola, Asea Brown Boveri, and many more.---I added a comma.

Ms.
Ms. Nooyi joined PepsiCo in 1994 and was...

... are the roots of her successful profession. ------The profession is not successful. She has success in her profession, but the profession is not successful. That's a minor grammar mishap.

Great enthusiasm here... I think you did well! However, the end is a little too simplistic and cliched. Do you know what I mean? Everyone says, "If I work hard, etc. I can achieve it!" You should add your own unique twist to this concept.

:-)


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