The smallest infection or malignancy can be catastrophic and debilitating for a person; Career Goals

Hey, I would appreciate any comments that you can give me about this short answer essay. It is a rough draft, and I am not a very good essay writer; so, your help will be greatly appreciated

The smallest infection or malignancy can be catastrophic and debilitating for a person emotionally and financially. Yet, doctors provide the one thing that each patient desires through the pain and unanswered questions - hope. Volunteering at my local hospital has allowed me to see the need for doctors who exhibit compassion and impart comfort but are relentless in the fight to offer hope.

I read your short answer and I can say I honestly love it. You used a great assortment of vocabulary words. I do feel however that you should somehow work to state what is your ultimate career goal at the very end as a way to conclude the essay. This would result in the reader able to know at the end straightforward your aim without any confusions. Hoped my suggestion helped :).

Hey thanks for the advice; I will keep it in mind.

Your welcome :)