This is the first draft of my Common app short answer.
My first match in Chinese Soccer School was a nightmare: all my fantastic dribbling skills lost their magic. After the match, coach told me, "You may have some talent in soccer, but you will achieve nothing without well-trained basics."
His words smashed my dream. I could not imagine practicing endlessly like other mediocre players. At last, I gave up my childhood dream of playing artfully like a trickster, just kept running, passing, and shooting. Realizing later that my friends still played the way I did before, I understood: "talent" will not make a master. Without sound basis, any flowery skill is useless.
I changed not only the way I played soccer, but also my attitude toward everything: I no longer believe that talent can be the shortcut to success, but stay modest and make steady progress. Coach's words always echo there: "you will achieve nothing without good foundation."
thebabybull Edit Delete Move 76.14.44.181
Nov 8, 2009 #10
I am worrying about my theme and language because there are simple too many people who write about the sports, yet this is truly the thing that changes me. I hope I can express the truth in the short answer. I will appreciate any comment and critique. Please review, thanks!
My first match in Chinese Soccer School was a nightmare: all my fantastic dribbling skills lost their magic. After the match, coach told me, "You may have some talent in soccer, but you will achieve nothing without well-trained basics."
His words smashed my dream. I could not imagine practicing endlessly like other mediocre players. At last, I gave up my childhood dream of playing artfully like a trickster, just kept running, passing, and shooting. Realizing later that my friends still played the way I did before, I understood: "talent" will not make a master. Without sound basis, any flowery skill is useless.
I changed not only the way I played soccer, but also my attitude toward everything: I no longer believe that talent can be the shortcut to success, but stay modest and make steady progress. Coach's words always echo there: "you will achieve nothing without good foundation."
thebabybull Edit Delete Move 76.14.44.181
Nov 8, 2009 #10
I am worrying about my theme and language because there are simple too many people who write about the sports, yet this is truly the thing that changes me. I hope I can express the truth in the short answer. I will appreciate any comment and critique. Please review, thanks!