The first two are the short essays for Tulane U.
Any corrections or ideas are appreciated:)
However they all pass the words limits. So i hope somebody can guide me to cut some part that is unnecessary.
The third one is a question about an essay from haverford college. as i don't really know what it is talking about or what should i write about it.
Thanks guys!!!
1. Have you ever studied abroad? (yes)
Where did you travel, and what did you study? (250 characters or fewer)
There is a soldier who sees the world - America. Experiencing living in American as the local, I studied abroad for my junior year in Dubuque, Iowa. On the academic part, I studied the most challenging classes: AP Calculus and Chemistry and others; on the living part, I learned how to get a long with others and had a wonderful time participating in extra curriculums.
2. Have you ever participated in a community service project abroad? (yes)
Where did you travel, and what type of community service project did you participate in? (250 characters or fewer)
"Would you like a coupon?" I repeated this sentence for thousands of times on a snowing day. Knocking from door to door, I sale coupon for the specialized chairs for the disabled children who also studied at our school. When I saw the glittering eyes on their faces as they received new chairs, I knew my life was fulfilled by helping others.
3.We recognize that reading about an Honor Code is very different from living with it. Nevertheless, if you come to Haverford, the Code will be a part of your college life. We therefore ask you to write a reflective essay of 1-2 pages in response to one of the following prompts:
CAN ANYBODY EXPLAIN WHAT THE HONOR CODE ESSAY IS??? (For Harverford College) THANKS!!!!
Any corrections or ideas are appreciated:)
However they all pass the words limits. So i hope somebody can guide me to cut some part that is unnecessary.
The third one is a question about an essay from haverford college. as i don't really know what it is talking about or what should i write about it.
Thanks guys!!!
1. Have you ever studied abroad? (yes)
Where did you travel, and what did you study? (250 characters or fewer)
There is a soldier who sees the world - America. Experiencing living in American as the local, I studied abroad for my junior year in Dubuque, Iowa. On the academic part, I studied the most challenging classes: AP Calculus and Chemistry and others; on the living part, I learned how to get a long with others and had a wonderful time participating in extra curriculums.
2. Have you ever participated in a community service project abroad? (yes)
Where did you travel, and what type of community service project did you participate in? (250 characters or fewer)
"Would you like a coupon?" I repeated this sentence for thousands of times on a snowing day. Knocking from door to door, I sale coupon for the specialized chairs for the disabled children who also studied at our school. When I saw the glittering eyes on their faces as they received new chairs, I knew my life was fulfilled by helping others.
3.We recognize that reading about an Honor Code is very different from living with it. Nevertheless, if you come to Haverford, the Code will be a part of your college life. We therefore ask you to write a reflective essay of 1-2 pages in response to one of the following prompts:
CAN ANYBODY EXPLAIN WHAT THE HONOR CODE ESSAY IS??? (For Harverford College) THANKS!!!!