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Stanford "What matters to you" essay -- drama club



aqedwsf 3 / 5  
Oct 30, 2012   #1
Prompt: What matters to you and why?
With a crooked blue broomstick in my sweating left hand, I was staring at the screen on the dark stage nervously. I exchanged glances with my fellow warriors, waiting for the signal. I saw the signal-

This was the beginning of our play, Much Ado about Nothing.
The only thing I remember about my first rehearsal is that when I walked onto the stage, feeling a strong impulse to act. From that moment, my life was connected with drama. Walking in the tiny forest in my school, I read the script again and again, imagining how I should utter each word. Every night before I fell asleep, I would rehearse in my mind, trying to find faults in my performance. Suddenly, my life became vibrant, exciting and-well, full of drama.

However, only after I became a director and co-producer did I realized what a drama really means: a giant project full of attractive challenges as well as trifling details. On one hand, I began to view the play from another perspective, caring for every subtlety of the whole play while plotting the framework of it. On the other hand, I have to work between our school's bureaucracy and our club, check about status of stage properties (i.e. changing broomsticks to swords), and plan for daily activities as well as communicate with our cast. During the hardest time, I often go to rehearsals without lunch to save time in case of possible delay in asking the official for various kinds of permissions and hall's key. In retrospect, the seemingly boring and sometimes painful process of preparation actually helped me became pragmatic. I learned to appreciate the beauty of ordinariness-the building block of marvelous projects. Somebody praises me a lot, but I am no more than an ordinary lover of drama. I just want to do it, and that's all it takes.

-We rushed onto the stage. Lights came on just on time. I raised my broomstick like a real hero. Yes, I'm ready.

Please be harsh. Any help will be appreciated! Thanks!

mystictiger 5 / 11  
Oct 30, 2012   #2
Since you started to use first person, continue with that till the end. Change "we" on the last line to "I". Everything else is all good.
mrityunjay6211 - / 1  
Oct 30, 2012   #3
WHAT MATTERS ME everything which is not original matters me.people are hypocrite i do not know why .why they have to play others role everyone has got single lifeline then why do not they live their own life .one more thing that matters me is freedom . our constitution gives us right to freedom but i have never felt so .Do these rights really exist. I have never believed in pseudo democracy but what i have seen in my real life that made me to question the existence of education .they say education gives us logic and reasoning and above all civic sense but when i see our leaders and their sedition laws it makes me sick its the only country where they protect the girls by keeping some more restriction on girls. this situation is analog to one condition where a girl is in jail and she is surrounded by some psychos outside the jail and our leaders say GIRL IS SAFE.its my country a free country but i can not walk in night when ever i want and they call it for safe purpose so i can not walk in my country so what is use of police they are here to protect us their sole work is not only to catch criminals but to protect us and its not a case of surprise if they still do not their role

jai hind
OP aqedwsf 3 / 5  
Oct 30, 2012   #4
Thanks everyone! Although I'm not sure what mrityunjay6211 means... Still, thanks guys! I will check out your essays asap!
historyfreak13 4 / 11  
Oct 30, 2012   #5
I suggest rather than telling us what you felt and listing everything, that you show rather than tell what u are doing. Most colleges are looking for creativeness in their writing and honesty which im sure u have. Try and get ur esay to stand out so that the reader is completly convincde about ur love for drama.


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