This is my 2nd UC prompt response, I know its short I have a limit of 1000 words for two essays and my other is 750 and I feel its real strong. Anything I can do to make this was strong as well despite its size? Anything helps
Tell us about a personal quality, talent, accomplishment, contribution or experience that is important to you. What about this quality or accomplishment makes you proud and how does it relate to the person you are?"
I have been playing soccer for as long as I can remember. Whether it be just for fun out at the park, or competitively against teams from all over the state, there is no doubt these experiences have been a big part of my life.
I remember starting out for the first time. I reluctant to get into it, but once I did, the sensation was like no other. Over time, my love for the game grew stronger and as as I became older it shifted from a hobby to a passion and I was able to gain more than just fun from these experiences.
My soccer career is bringing me more than I even imagined. It is teaching me many things I am able to use both on and off the field. However, I know these qualities will not be handed to me, but rather, I must earn them myself. Through the long, hard practices and early morning games, things like my leadership, responsibility, and commitment, to say a few, have all strengthened. I continue to carry these qualities on with me as they have beneficial in other aspects of my life such as school and family.
Today, I take pride in everything the game has been able to give me. The impact of these effects have been huge and have contributed greatly into making me who I am now.
Tell us about a personal quality, talent, accomplishment, contribution or experience that is important to you. What about this quality or accomplishment makes you proud and how does it relate to the person you are?"
I have been playing soccer for as long as I can remember. Whether it be just for fun out at the park, or competitively against teams from all over the state, there is no doubt these experiences have been a big part of my life.
I remember starting out for the first time. I reluctant to get into it, but once I did, the sensation was like no other. Over time, my love for the game grew stronger and as as I became older it shifted from a hobby to a passion and I was able to gain more than just fun from these experiences.
My soccer career is bringing me more than I even imagined. It is teaching me many things I am able to use both on and off the field. However, I know these qualities will not be handed to me, but rather, I must earn them myself. Through the long, hard practices and early morning games, things like my leadership, responsibility, and commitment, to say a few, have all strengthened. I continue to carry these qualities on with me as they have beneficial in other aspects of my life such as school and family.
Today, I take pride in everything the game has been able to give me. The impact of these effects have been huge and have contributed greatly into making me who I am now.
