question-What is your career goal and how will an NYIT education help you accomplish it.
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My ambition is my greatest motivation. I have always wanted to become a prominent architect one day. With the help of an NYIT education, I hope to fulfill that goal.
I imagine myself working for one of the country's most prestigious architectural firms. But accomplishing that or becoming successful in anything requires hard work and perseverance. I needed more than just imagining about the future.
With this dream floating in my mind, I decided to work hard in school if I wanted this dream to come true. Being so competitive, I took up many challenges in and out of school. I found a sense of enjoyment from taking up challenges. But I still felt empty. I need something else.
But it wasn't just all about being competitive. I realized that there was a very important key ingredient missing in fulfilling this ambition. It was a feeling of passion. And I truly felt that I wanted to become an architect. I needed to make this passion of mine into reality.
The passion to achieve my goals is the idea and feeling that will make my ambition come true: it is the passion I have that will bring out the best in me. But I have a feeling that this isn't enough. I need another kind of motivation to always keep me going and to bring me to even greater heights.
And NYIT can be that motivator that will bring me to great heights. I can go beyond expectations. I believe that what I will be given will bring me a world of opportunity and hope for the ambition I want to fulfill. I hope to experience all my achievements and obstacles with the guide of NYIT. I want to leave my faith in their hands to bring me into the reality of my ambitions for the future. I hope to be a big help as well by giving them my dedication and my all.
Please help me edit it!
My ambition is my greatest motivation. I have always wanted to become a prominent architect one day. With the help of an NYIT education, I hope to fulfill that goal.
I imagine myself working for one of the country's most prestigious architectural firms. But accomplishing that or becoming successful in anything requires hard work and perseverance. I needed more than just imagining about the future.
With this dream floating in my mind, I decided to work hard in school if I wanted this dream to come true. Being so competitive, I took up many challenges in and out of school. I found a sense of enjoyment from taking up challenges. But I still felt empty. I need something else.
But it wasn't just all about being competitive. I realized that there was a very important key ingredient missing in fulfilling this ambition. It was a feeling of passion. And I truly felt that I wanted to become an architect. I needed to make this passion of mine into reality.
The passion to achieve my goals is the idea and feeling that will make my ambition come true: it is the passion I have that will bring out the best in me. But I have a feeling that this isn't enough. I need another kind of motivation to always keep me going and to bring me to even greater heights.
And NYIT can be that motivator that will bring me to great heights. I can go beyond expectations. I believe that what I will be given will bring me a world of opportunity and hope for the ambition I want to fulfill. I hope to experience all my achievements and obstacles with the guide of NYIT. I want to leave my faith in their hands to bring me into the reality of my ambitions for the future. I hope to be a big help as well by giving them my dedication and my all.