Temple Transfer Essay; 'received a phone call from Temple University'

i really need help guys so please help me .

Please type an essay of 2000 characters (approximately 300 words) that tells us more about you. Imagine you have graduated from Temple University. You are preparing to attend your 10-year reunion, and the alumni office has asked you to write a one-page essay about your personal and professional accomplishments since graduation. What would yours say?

Well where should i begin, about a month ago I was sitting in my office working on a very tough case, was when I received a phone call from Temple University alumni office and was offered the opportunity to elaborate on my professional and personal accomplishments at my ten year reunion. At that moment i was nothing but ecstatic and honored to do so. Ten years ago i would have never believed I would be where I am today. I am proud to say I am one of the top FBI agents in the United States and I also have a very beautiful family of my own...

this is just the start . dont know what else too do :(

I think this would be a great essay to talk about how going to Temple ultimately shaped your life and your life goals. Talk about the leadership opportunities you experienced while volunteering with campus groups and how that lead you to know you wanted to work as a member of an FBI team. You could also talk about how Temple helped you to develop your critical thinking skills that just helped you bust a huge case wide open. I really think you should get creative and have fun with this essay! Tell them where you want to be in 10 years and how going to school at Temple helped shape that and guide you to your destiny!

Best of luck!
- J

This can really be a great imaginative narration of your thoughts. You can explain your dream (what you want with your career and what you want to achieve in your life). Be creative and enjoy explaining your dream. Only you can explain your career goals and dreams hence, sail in the sea of imagination and jot down your thoughts.

You should never start a sentence with the word 'Well.' It's even not an actual word - is it; )