Things To Do For Joy - MIT Essay

Can you tell me if this kind of essay is good to read?

We know you lead a busy life, full of activities, many of which are required of you. Tell us about something you do for the pleasure of it

I always feel excitement when I type MIT open course web , edx or coursera web's address on my phone's browser. My eyes start to search for an interesting course to take, and my heart's voice shouts passionately, "This must be cool! That must be fun!". Then my brain will try to calm my heart down, "Relax, buddy. We can't take all the courses available. We have busy days ahead.". Finally I click one of the courses and my whole body will feel the joy of being ready to learn something new. This happens every Friday night when I prepare my things-to-do list for the weekend.

I always feel impatient to wait on weekdays. My heart often begs, "Please, hurry Saturday.". And my brain will sigh in response, "Be patient, buddy. Do your homework first.". So there it is, my passion for learning new things is what my whole soul is fighting for.

It is a good simple essay. However, if there is not limit, try to elaborate it. I mean, it is really brief, maybe it would cause you problem. :)

You like to learn try to elaborate on what type of courses interests you, do you only take up online courses ? or do you like to go out and learn from experience. Talk about different ways you learn and how you use that knowledge.