My thirsts for knowledge - HEOP college

People normally ask each other what's their biggest dream, what do they want out of life and what do they want to do in the future? These are hard questions to answer because what is the right answer to these questions and to me the answer is simple, education. Why education you think, well without an education it's hard to understand, live and enjoy life especially in today's society.

My thirsts for knowledge comes from seeing my parents struggle to pay bills and making ends meet. Having an education is a big deal to me because without an education my future will not be as bright as I want it to be. I am a very dedicated person towards my education, community, and future and if I get accepted to the HEOP it would be greatly appreciated. Knowing that it would be nearly impossible for me to afford to attend an amazing school like Barnard College, the HEOP will help me gain qualities that I would not gain from other schools.

People normally ask each other what their biggest dream is , what do they want out of life and what do they want to do in the future. These are hard questions to answer(hard to answer for who?)what is the right answer to these questions and to me the answer is simple, education.Instead you can write:because many people do not know the answer. To me, however, the answer is simple: it is education. Why education you thinkask?W ell , it is simple; without an education it's hard to understand, to live and to enjoy life especially in today's society.

My thirsts for knowledge comes from seeing my parents struggle to pay bills and making ends meet. Having an education is a big deal to me because without an education, my future will not be as bright as I want it to be. I am a very dedicated person towardswhen it comes to my education, community, and future.and If I get accepted to the HEOP, it would be greatly appreciated. Knowing that it would becould be nearly impossible for me to afford to attend an amazing school like Barnard College, the HEOP will help me gain qualities that I would not gain from other schools.

It's a rough draft draft, so just get it revised by teachers and it will be great, and you'll get accepted to Barnard College. :D Good luck.

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