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"Thoughts without content are empty, intuitions without concepts are blind."



yoyott 3 / 6  
Dec 29, 2010   #1
The excerpt is: 1."Rigorous reasoning is crucial in mathematics, and insight plays an important secondary role these days. In the natural sciences, I would say that the order of these two virtues is reversed. Rigor is, of course, very important. But the most important value is insight--insight into the workings of the world. It may be because there is another guarantor of correctness in the sciences, namely, the empirical evidence from observation and experiments."

"Thoughts without content are empty, intuitions without concepts are blind." where the words of Immanuel Kant. From these words I understood that in order for the world to make sense, we need to combine our two faculties; our senses and our mind.

For example, if we see a stick in the water our visionary sense might mislead us into believing it is bent. But once we take it out we can see it is not deformed. Therefore it is hard to come to a conclusion by just relying on our senses. Instead I believe that, we need to allow some explanation to be given in order to understand the concept of the bent stick. The reason behind it is simple. That is, the refraction of light has allowed us to see the stick bent while it was in the water.

In mathematics, reasoning is crucial. For the years that I have been debating on how to believe the theories that I have been taught. The science lessons where easy to understand because, I could prove them with my senses, but in mathematics, especially with trigonometry, it was hard to relate them and prove them with my senses. Over the years, I have related the theories that I have picked up into everyday situation. This helped me prove that mathematics was something that I could take out of the classroom and use in practical every day circumstances. But now that I have come out of that "I need to see to believe" mentality, I now depend more on the reasoning in than insight.

Hence, I believe that weather it is in mathematics or natural science the importance of being rationalist or empirical may be reverse. But in the end, they are both necessary in the conclusion to convince the hardest judges (human beings), but I would agree more with reasoning as it is the key to the world around us, because after all, "We are because we think".

What do u guys think of my response ? =S

chet1119 2 / 14  
Dec 29, 2010   #2
Hi Yohana

I think you have fallen into the trap of making this essay more argumentative rather than personal. Whilst overall the essay is excellent with a sound chain of reasoning, it reveals very little about yourself.

I would suggest you to take a step backwards and reconsider the prompt, which I think is merely asking how you perceive the world.

Good luck!
OP yoyott 3 / 6  
Dec 29, 2010   #3
tnx for the input here's the new and improved version but its a bit long tho it needs to be 300 words =S
canes4life 3 / 46  
Dec 30, 2010   #4
I don't know how strict Amherst is, but for some schools the word limit doesn't have to be exact. I don't know if you have to type this essay in a small box that cuts you off, but if you don't I wouldn't fret over the essay not being exactly 300 words. A school is not going to reject you because you wrote more words than the limit says.

"Thoughts without content are empty, intuitions without concepts are blind." were the words of Immanuel Kant.

"Hence, I believe that whether it is in mathematics or natural science the importance of being rationalist or empirical may be reverse."

I think you could combine some sentences to be more concise, especially the example about the stick. Perhaps something like "If we see a stick in the water, our eyes lead us to believe it's bent when it isn't really. Therefore, it is difficult to arrive at a conclusion when solely relying on senses."

"The importance of being rational or empirical. . ."

Good luck!
OP yoyott 3 / 6  
Dec 30, 2010   #5
Thank you sooo much u r a life saver.Do you think it's argumentative? and Happy New Year!!
EF_Kevin 8 / 13053  
Jan 14, 2011   #6
Were, not where. ---> "Thoughts without content are empty, intuitions without concepts are blind," were the words of Immanuel Kant. -----And I changed that period to a comma. Do you see why? It is quoted material, and then you wrote: , were the words of... --- so it is all part of the same sentence.

Is the essay argumentative? That depends on if people would disagree with this: In order for the world to make sense, we need to combine our two faculties; our senses and our mind.

I don't think people would disagree with that. That means it is not arguable, not argumentative. However, you can make it argumentative by changing the focus so that you actually make an assertion. For example, if you DRAW a conclusion based on this idea, it might be a conclusion some people disagree with. Write this in a way some people will disagree with, and it will be a perfect argumentative essay.

:-)


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