Hi, I wrote an opening for the essay, it's about my interest in graphic design as my major. please commend my essay.
Question:
What interests you the most about this major? Please be specific - those evaluating these essays are highly interested in your response. If Undecided, what areas of study do you look forward to studying in college? (50-500 words)
Here's the opening:
The start of a complicated relationship between me and art began at the age of three. A small kid who piggybacks the floor and draws her future in colorful colors on a large sketchbook. The thread has continued so far. I always have been convinced of my future from the beginning, dreaming that I will influence people by doing things related to art.
I like painting and was full of creativity, but fine arts could not express it all. Rather, as I grow up, I realize that required higher skills and abstract pictures that were difficult to understand only added doubts about my skills and dreams. It was in the third grade of middle school that I first know about graphic design. At that time, I had various hobbies by drawing pictures with a computer's paint or making various videos with a video editor on my phone, and my mother's friend, who notice my talents and my concerns about my dream, told me for the first time, "What about a graphic designer if you're interested in both computers and arts?" As soon as I knew the job of graphic designer, I looked for out of doubt, I felt that it was the answer I had been looking for, and for me, who had always painted with pencils or crayons, it felt like starting a new adventure. Since then, I have been researching graphic design for a long time, and the more I know, the more I have no choice but to fall in love with the charm of it.
Question:
Please provide an essay that explains why you chose your intended program of study.
What interests you the most about this major? Please be specific - those evaluating these essays are highly interested in your response. If Undecided, what areas of study do you look forward to studying in college? (50-500 words)
Here's the opening:
The start of a complicated relationship between me and art began at the age of three. A small kid who piggybacks the floor and draws her future in colorful colors on a large sketchbook. The thread has continued so far. I always have been convinced of my future from the beginning, dreaming that I will influence people by doing things related to art.
I like painting and was full of creativity, but fine arts could not express it all. Rather, as I grow up, I realize that required higher skills and abstract pictures that were difficult to understand only added doubts about my skills and dreams. It was in the third grade of middle school that I first know about graphic design. At that time, I had various hobbies by drawing pictures with a computer's paint or making various videos with a video editor on my phone, and my mother's friend, who notice my talents and my concerns about my dream, told me for the first time, "What about a graphic designer if you're interested in both computers and arts?" As soon as I knew the job of graphic designer, I looked for out of doubt, I felt that it was the answer I had been looking for, and for me, who had always painted with pencils or crayons, it felt like starting a new adventure. Since then, I have been researching graphic design for a long time, and the more I know, the more I have no choice but to fall in love with the charm of it.
