How does USD stand out amongst all of the other colleges to which you are applying?
University of San Diego stands out the most amongst all the other colleges i'm applying to because at USD I know I will be challenged academically so when graduating from USD I will not just have a degree in Biology, but I will have attained the knowledge to further my education in medical school. University of San Diego also stands out because of it's close-knit community and active student life on and off campus.
please someone help me fix this!
You need to focus on more specifics. Saying " UC san diego stands out because of its close knit community and active student life on campus" sounds very vague- there are thousands of other colleges that sentence can be applied to. show that you did the research on the college, and focus on you- find a specific passion of yours and talk about how the college will help you 1) live that passion 2) flourish in college and beyond.
Well, I find your response does not give much solid reasons as to why USD stands out other choices. If you say it will challenge you academically, you need to say how it does so. The reasons you have given seem to be very general and not substantial enough to convince the admin guys.