'Virtual DJ Home' Rules that apply to the community Intro

After coming home from an exhausting day at school, I threw my black Jansport backpack on my mattress and quickly turned on my Macbook. As fast as I could, I quickly pressed the red application button. "Virtual DJ Home" is the application that I invest two hours of my time everyday. Through working on making music, I formed a strong community where I was able to post and review music, buy and sell music equipments, and make strong connections with other DJs. As much as I love the DJ community, I respect the rules that every DJ must follow. By following the six main rules of my community, I became a dutiful member.

NOTE: I am bad at writing these and connecting to the whole essay. The prompt is writing about rules of my community, written or unwritten, and what is the significance.

Thank you!!

I like this a lot, and find it very evocative. However, I don't think "dutiful" is the best word to use, since it sometimes has negative connotations. Following the rules made you a better community member, but also a more productive one and probably led to a more enjoyable experience, as well, and that's probably something you want to bring up. You're glad to be a part of this community, and that should come across most of all. I'd love to see more about what the rules are! Good luck!