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Maximum length of 250 words
1.The University of Washington seeks to create a community of students richly diverse in cultural backgrounds, experiences, and viewpoints. How would you contribute to this community?
I am a Chinese. I grew up in an environment that is very different from most of the world. I hope to celebrate our festivals like Chinese New Year and Mid-autumn Festival with other ethnic groups and exchange our histories and cultural heitages.
China has the largest population in the world, I hope to invite schoolmates to my hometown to see how exploded our buses and supermarkets are and the friendliness of Chinese people. Since our government practices one-child policy, I have no siblings. I want to share my loneliness and the pressure from my parents with others, and tell them how lucky they are to have sisters or brothers around.
I left my hometown to study in Singapore at the age of 15. Initially I had a hard time fitting in. I had to manage English and learn how to live in a multicultural society. I want to share the lessons and transformations I went through in the 4 years in Singapore. Since many Malays and Indians live around us, I have many anecdotes about our cultural differences to share with students in UW. Singapore values racial harmony very much, so I grew a sence of mutual respect towards other races. I hope to bring the respect to UW and encourage students to approach new encounters with a broader mind.
Finally, I am a diligent learner. I have a strong academic interest in financial mathematics. I look forward to being challenged intellectually, and challenging others in return. I hope to add to the diversity of UW.
Maximum length of 250 words
1.The University of Washington seeks to create a community of students richly diverse in cultural backgrounds, experiences, and viewpoints. How would you contribute to this community?
I am a Chinese. I grew up in an environment that is very different from most of the world. I hope to celebrate our festivals like Chinese New Year and Mid-autumn Festival with other ethnic groups and exchange our histories and cultural heitages.
China has the largest population in the world, I hope to invite schoolmates to my hometown to see how exploded our buses and supermarkets are and the friendliness of Chinese people. Since our government practices one-child policy, I have no siblings. I want to share my loneliness and the pressure from my parents with others, and tell them how lucky they are to have sisters or brothers around.
I left my hometown to study in Singapore at the age of 15. Initially I had a hard time fitting in. I had to manage English and learn how to live in a multicultural society. I want to share the lessons and transformations I went through in the 4 years in Singapore. Since many Malays and Indians live around us, I have many anecdotes about our cultural differences to share with students in UW. Singapore values racial harmony very much, so I grew a sence of mutual respect towards other races. I hope to bring the respect to UW and encourage students to approach new encounters with a broader mind.
Finally, I am a diligent learner. I have a strong academic interest in financial mathematics. I look forward to being challenged intellectually, and challenging others in return. I hope to add to the diversity of UW.