IELTS Task 1 :Rechargable vs Disposal Battery (re-write)This is the link of my old writing
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The line graph compares the forecast sales of rechargeable and disposable battery throughout the world over 13-years period, from 2009 to 2025
Overall, all mentioned batteries are excluded of cars, laptops, tablets and smartphones batteries. While the rechargeable battery will be increased on sale throughout the globe, the disposable counterpart is predicted to decrease on sale in the overall year statistic.
As per rechargeable trend, it is obvious that the sale will be increased gradually. Such kind of battery was sold around 2 billion dollars in 2009 then rose to nearly 7 billion on the overall sale in 2013. Avicenne Energy, a company held the estimation, reckons that the sale of rechargeable battery will be estimated to reach more than 20 billion dollars in year 2025. By comparison with the happening year, such estimation has almost six fold increase in full loan of sales.
A series data on disposable trend reveals that the battery selling will estimated experiencing a decrease towards the next year under review. Although there was a huge sale by around of 12 billion dollars in 2009, the disposable battery became less favourable by 10 billion dollars sold over the next four-year. Then the company forecasts that the sale will be dropped consecutively to just 8 billion dollars in 2025.