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In the past, when students did a university degree, they tended to study in their own country.
nowadays, they have more opportunity to study abroad.
what are the advantages and disadvantages of this development ?
you should use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your argument with examples and relevant evidence.
The students just study in their nation and are rarely to abroad study because of many reasons in the past. But for now, they have more chances for studying in another country. I am more likely this opportunity for building future leader. But there are so many benefits even drawbacks of abroad study. While this trend will lead to students in building up their carier, it has also several advantages.
In this paragraph, i will explain about disadvantages of abroad study. Firstly, to get LoA (Letter Of Acceptance) it is difficult from another university, because you must send an essay, personal statement and score of ielts. Ever country has different standart for ielts for example United States, United Kingdom, Australia with band 6.5. but several country have band 4 until 6 such as Thailand, China and many more. It will consume time and for several people it is waste time. Secondly, the geography conditional must suit our body. I heard from the leader of LPDP, Mr Abdul Kahar said one of the awardee in Canada cant survive because if he comes out home he will be nose blood. Thirdly, we can found some environmental not good for moeslim religion. They feel difficult to find "halal food" it means refreshment allowed by god. The last point is to survive with their cultures, maybe when arrived feel strange people but as time goes on it will be common.
For advantages of studying abroad is so important especially for this country. Because this nation needs smart people for making better future. I think we can learn about their diversity in other country. One of the most advantages is the chance to entrance the university in the world.
please give me your suggestion for my practice
thanks
In the past, when students did a university degree, they tended to study in their own country.
nowadays, they have more opportunity to study abroad.
what are the advantages and disadvantages of this development ?
you should use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your argument with examples and relevant evidence.
The students just study in their nation and are rarely to abroad study because of many reasons in the past. But for now, they have more chances for studying in another country. I am more likely this opportunity for building future leader. But there are so many benefits even drawbacks of abroad study. While this trend will lead to students in building up their carier, it has also several advantages.
In this paragraph, i will explain about disadvantages of abroad study. Firstly, to get LoA (Letter Of Acceptance) it is difficult from another university, because you must send an essay, personal statement and score of ielts. Ever country has different standart for ielts for example United States, United Kingdom, Australia with band 6.5. but several country have band 4 until 6 such as Thailand, China and many more. It will consume time and for several people it is waste time. Secondly, the geography conditional must suit our body. I heard from the leader of LPDP, Mr Abdul Kahar said one of the awardee in Canada cant survive because if he comes out home he will be nose blood. Thirdly, we can found some environmental not good for moeslim religion. They feel difficult to find "halal food" it means refreshment allowed by god. The last point is to survive with their cultures, maybe when arrived feel strange people but as time goes on it will be common.
For advantages of studying abroad is so important especially for this country. Because this nation needs smart people for making better future. I think we can learn about their diversity in other country. One of the most advantages is the chance to entrance the university in the world.
