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The advancement of machines cannot solve novel situations which can merely be conducted by people


zul2805_es 7 / 18  
Sep 27, 2016   #1
TED Summary: Anthony Goldbloom - The jobs we'll lose to machines - and the ones we won't

Anthony has niece who has father as a lawyer and mother as a doctor. Over the time, when his niece became adult, the parents jobs are becoming extremely change. It happens because the jobs has been replaced by machines which are known as artificial intelligence.

In early '90s, machine learning initially utilized in the industry which helped simple tasks. This day and age, it immensely improve since it can conduct complex assignment such as grading an essay and diagnosing diabetic people.

However, the advancement of machine still has curb. It cannot solve a novel situations which can merely be conducted by people. A person can solve a new problem that he or she never even face it. This is that the ability of machine cannot tackle the issue.

arisandy14 7 / 11 1  
Sep 27, 2016   #2
Perhaps this can be some corrections.

the word--"becoming extremely change"--it will be better if changed to be "becoming change extremely", it because extremely cannot be modifier of change.

the word "initially utilized", you probably mean that it is passive, so it becomes "was initially utilized".

the word "it immensely improve" = it immensely improves

the word "a novel situations", becomes (novel situations/ the novel situations) because article a/an for singular noun.

thanks may those be useful.
ibal28 20 / 30 5  
Sep 28, 2016   #3
Hi zul. You did it well, I just want to give you few of corrections..

Anthony has A niece who has father as a lawyer and mother as a doctor. Over the time, when his niece became AN adult, the parentsparent's jobs are becoming extremely changebecoming change extremly . It happens because OF the jobs hashave('has' does not appear to agree with the plural subject like 'jobs') been replaced by machines ...

==> pay attention for an article in every word, preposition

In THE early '90s, machine learning was initially utilized (to make it passive you need to o+v+v3) in the industry which ...
This day and age, it immensely improveimproves(the subject pronoun it and the verb improve are not in agreement) since it can ...

It cannot solve a novel situations (article a may not be required with the plural noun situations in this sentence) which can merely be ...

Here you have it. Hope it can help you..


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